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Oh Yes! :3 I love this picture! >w< I think it turned out great
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The concept is very adorable and fanciful. What more could someone want than to float away? I think compositionally, the work is good, but there are other areas that need improvement.
Beware of using yellow for the sun, especially a darker saturated yellow. The rays don't meld well with the background. Normally, in paintings, the sun is depicted as white, or a very light yellow, with lighter rays.
Definitely pull up reference for the landscape. Add texture! Liven it up a little! At the moment, the big rock formation in the bottom half is nothing more than idle somewhat empty space. If there were more overlapping mountains or rocks, then it would be an area of interest. The clouds could also use some reference.
Overall, this piece has a lot of potential. Pull up some reference and rework certain areas, and you'll be on your way to a fantastic piece of work. Keep up the good work!
Beware of using yellow for the sun, especially a darker saturated yellow. The rays don't meld well with the background. Normally, in paintings, the sun is depicted as white, or a very light yellow, with lighter rays.
Definitely pull up reference for the landscape. Add texture! Liven it up a little! At the moment, the big rock formation in the bottom half is nothing more than idle somewhat empty space. If there were more overlapping mountains or rocks, then it would be an area of interest. The clouds could also use some reference.
Overall, this piece has a lot of potential. Pull up some reference and rework certain areas, and you'll be on your way to a fantastic piece of work. Keep up the good work!